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Sunset

A poem

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massJun 20, 2025

Sunset


For a long time,


it didn’t make a difference to me


whether or not the sun set.



I accepted it as natural,


inevitable and fair,


like the leaves withering off the trees


when autumn comes.



I can no longer accept the sun setting,


because it signifies my experience with you


is becoming a memory.



Each falling dusk


is a moment in time with you


that I’ll never return to.



I want to crystallize the moment,


so that we can remain,


free and as uncaring as children,


under a still sky.



But nothing remains to time.


We dissipate with the closing day,


vanish,


and dissolve.


We are the blue


that drains from the sky


at sunset.


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alvinsergent7 months ago

Additionally, you should consider pairing this with your other poem. The themes are so similar and imagery so related they would benefit from being in close proximity.

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