The soundless river pouring from the cave

Is neither strong, nor deep;

Only an image fancied in conceit.

I lie and wait for morning, and the birds,

The first steps going down the unswept street,

Voices of girls with scarves around their heads.

Fretful wakeful dissatisfaction, fear of malignancy in nature, the sudden step out from the poet's feelings to the indifferent bustling of the world. . . it's all there in embryo. And the differences are illustrative. The circle of Larkin's subjects may not have enlarged but his technique certainly changed. The symbolist mode, which is frequent in The North Ship ("The soundless river pouring from the cave...") is almost totally absent from his mature work. And he managed to free himself from writing in a self-consciously poetic register ("an image fancied in conceit"). I'm a huge fan of lofty diction myself but it's always a little arch and affected in early Larkin:

What if it has drawn up

All quietness and certitude of worth

Wherewith to fill its cup. . .? ("III")

To wake, and hear a cock

Out of the distance crying. . . ("IV")

Is it a trick or a trysting-place,

The woods we have found to walk? ("XXVIII")

Not absent from his later work, but heavily modulated, is nature poetry. I had no idea how Yeatsian (and through Yeats, Keatsian) this collection would be. There is a proliferation of beasts and skies and seas—always sailed upon by rigged, not motoring, ships—out of which the poet mines feeling:

All catches alight

At the spread of spring:

Birds crazed with flight,

Branches that fling

Leaves up to the light—

Every one thing,

Shape, colour and voice,

Cries out, Rejoice! ("I")

And it's good but not natural. There's always something stilted ("Rejoice!" above); and the absence of anything that clearly belongs to the poet's own time and place feels like he has a blindspot, hasn't yet developed the wide sympathies that let the mature Larkin write sublime poetry about waste paper baskets ("As Bad as a Mile") and advertising hoardings ("Sunny Prestatyn"). Larkin was raised in bombed-out Coventry, not under Ben Bulben, and at this stage he needed to grow into what was really in his bones and out of the shadow of his influences. There is one tantalising hint of this future growth, which will culminate in "Here" and "The Whitsun Weddings", his magnificent lyrics that take in nature and the modern city in a single sweep:

Waiting for breakfast, while she brushed her hair,

I looked down at the empty hotel yard

Once meant for coaches. Cobblestones were wet,

But sent no light back to the loaded sky,

Sunk as it was with mist down to the roofs.

Drainpipes and fire-escape climbed up

Past rooms still burning their electric light:

I thought: Featureless morning, featureless night.

Misjudgment: for the stones slept, and the mist

Wandered absolvingly past all it touched,

Yet hung like a stayed breath. . . ("XXXII")

And there are two poems of finished excellence. First, the epigram "XXVI", which cannot be read without being learned (the soundest test of poetry):

This is the first thing

I have understood:

Time is the echo of an axe

Within a wood.

Second, the break-up poem "XXIV":

Love, we must part now: do not let it be

Calamitous and bitter. In the past

There has been too much moonlight and self-pity:

Let us have done with it: for now at last

Never has sun more boldly paced the sky,

Never were hearts more eager to be free,

To kick down worlds, lash forests; you and I

No longer hold them; we are husks, that see

The grain going forward to a different use.

There is regret. Always, there is regret.

But it is better that our lives unloose,

As two tall ships, wind-mastered, wet with light,

Break from an estuary with their courses set,

And waving part, and waving drop from sight.

I like to think of this as Larkin's farewell to the juvenile poet he then was. Too much moonlight and all the other natural mainstays of poetry: now for mastery of the colloquial, from "kick down" onwards.